Can’t Go Home
5
By mssg1
Kept me guessing til the end.
Interesting
5
By Jenniecat 1
It keeps you wondering about the killer.
Alright story line, horrible proof reading
2
By CosmicQ12
This story is alright, however I found it difficult to get through because of all of the typos, the over use of long words to describe things that lack the sophisticated definition of words used, and too long drawn out sentences to describe things that could take three words. When the characters are trying to make a decision on whether or not to do something, it’s always “former or latter”.. ex: I was thinking about eating a pop tart or eating a yogurt. The former is really delicious but the latter is healthier… EVERY TIME the characters are making a decision. It’s over used. Agitating.
Can’t Go Home
3
By Montanafilly73
Interesting and gripping storyline. I was shocked when I found out who the murderer/kidnapper was. Good story.
Can’t go home
5
By *jas
Intriguing keeps you guessing