The story was good and even though I figured out the twists beforehand, it was enjoyable. I cannot give it 4 stars as some of the dialogue was inconsistent for the characters and sometimes a bit stilted, along with wanting a bit more polishing.

Book One of the Ashes series by Paul J Bennett. Loved this book it had me by the first chapter. The characters were compelling, I was rooting for them throughout the entire read. The story painted was vivid and exciting enough to make me want to keep reading even when a tired old man was exhausted from the day’s activities. I am looking forward to the next book. Thank you Mr. Barrett for your thoughts, time and imagination. Sincerely, J.W. Harris Jr.

Fast reading with a good plot

Loved the new series opener. Great new characters and in another part of the same world. I wonder if the two story lines will eventually meet. It was over too soon. I am ready for more. I was given a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review, and asked to read this book prior to the prequel. I would recommend reading the prequel first.